Finished Documentary

Our Little Secret from Cameron Ebbs on Vimeo.

Finished Double-Page Spread

Finished Newspaper Advertisement

Evaluation Pt 3 - What have you learned from your audience feedback?

Our Little Secret - Audience Feedback from Cameron Ebbs on Vimeo.

So what have i learnt from my audience feedback?

Through intensive audience feedback taken by questionnaires and viewings i was able to evaluate the effectiveness and impact of my documentary and poster. The overall opinion on my documentart was very complimentary. However, recurring elements were at times, the background music was louder than the presenters voice and occasionally the lighting wasn't quite right to supplement the documentary. Despite this, generally the comments were very good and i am pleased with the overall outcome.

In order to improve my documentary i could of spent a bit more time on getting the sound right and ensuring that the presenters voiced was dominant. Also, i could of been more careful in choosing the correct time of day to secure perfect lighting for the documentary.

Again, overall the comments made on my poster and DPS were very good. I asked a wide variety of people and secured some interesting and useful information.

"It really grabs my attention"

"I like the fact that the poster uses dark colours to relate it to the documentary"

"The doll is effective"

However, not all comments made were positive:

"There is not enough information on the poster."

"The double page spread is lacking in complexity"

In hindsight, i could of tried to include more information on both the poster and DPS, however, i think that bombarding people with information often takes away the effectiveness and impact of the poster and DPS. Therefore, overall i am very pleased with both my print products.

Evaluation Pt 1 - In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

Evaluation part 1

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Copyright Requests

In my documentary I wanted to use background music to create a suitable atmosphere. The music I chose to use was Band of Horses - The Funeral and Martina McBride - Concrete Angel. In order to legally use these tracks I wrote to the respective record labels stating my cause and need for the tracks... They replied and it was prefectly acceptable for me to use the tracks.

Advertising Theory - Mort Goldstrom (10 Components of a Good Ad Layout)

When surfing the net for advertising theories and theorists... i came across the name Mort Goldstrom. He is the Vice President of Revenue Development for the Newspaper Association of America and as part of his job has published 10 components of a good newspaper advertisement. They are as follows:

1) Border
Seperates the ad from the surrounding type. They should complement the look that you are developing with your ad and should never be the most prominent part of your ad.

2) Heading
The headline is a key part of the sales message; no matter how well the ad is presented, it can’t succeed if it is not read. Following the headline, you’ll have subheads that either clarify or amplify the thought in the headline. Subheads should be handled in much the same way as headlines, but are visually weighted somewhere between the body copy and the heading.

3) Illustrations
An effective way to draw the reader’s attention to an ad is with the illustration. Studies have shown that an ad with an illustration that takes up 50 percent or more of the ad space increases readership by as much as 37 percent.

4) Price
Price is an important (and often dominant) element in a layout. Many local advertisers build their ads around the price. You can accent price in several ways: (1) as part of the heading, (2) the core the ad is built around, (3) preceding the copy, and (4) in the text space.

5) White Space
Use as much white space as you can afford to use. It minimizes distraction and draws attention to what matters most.

6) Body Copy
Body copy develops and expands on the benefits offered in the headline. The power of well written advertising copy is proven by the billions of dollars of sales directly resulted from great newspaper advertising. Benefits should be written as though you were making friendly, personal conversation.

7) Signature
The signature is often a logotype. Though often used synonymously with logo, signature means the name of the advertiser in any form, and unlike the logo, may change form from one ad to the next. Remember not to let the signature overpower other important aspects.

8) The One Second Test
The one second test is a way of determining whether a reader can tell at a glance what the advertiser is selling. It simply means that you should be able to look at a layout for a second, then close your eyes and recall its sales message. If you didn’t get the message, you need to improve the layout. Another factor that affects eye appeal is concentration. This means grouping your selling points into display headings and text masses.

9) Colour
Try to achieve contrast in layout by effective use of different size type, bold type and colour. If you can, try to fit color into your advertising budget. Introducing colour increases impact.

10) Creativity
If your ad is developed with simplicity, focal point and sequence in mind, then it will be appealing to the eye. However, some ads are more visually appealing than others. The difference is in creativity. Remember, creativity rarely occurs as a stroke of genius; it usually comes through persistent attempts and hard work.

Here is a link to the page that I found the 10 components of a good newspaper ad:
http://advertising-and-marketing.info/newspaper-advertising-layout-tips.html